From bdc6fe0c1fdbb2d4462d142c6462150dd8394136 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ashelyn Rose <git@ashen.earth>
Date: Mon, 2 Sep 2024 01:50:33 -0600
Subject: Add ghost and remove first name

---
 app/about/page.tsx | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'app/about/page.tsx')

diff --git a/app/about/page.tsx b/app/about/page.tsx
index 50bea94..11b3d74 100644
--- a/app/about/page.tsx
+++ b/app/about/page.tsx
@@ -49,10 +49,11 @@ export default function About() {
       </main>
       <div className={styles.summary}>
         <p>
-          Generally the above four members are who interact with others
-          throughout our day to day.  They handle our work, our social relationships,
-          and our broader plans for life.  In addition, our system has another
-          internally-focused member who you will likely not meet unless you seek it out:
+          Generally unless you know us well, the above three members are who you
+          will be interacting with day to day.  They handle the majority of our work,
+          conversations, and decisions throughout the day.  In addition though, if you
+          get to know us better you will likely meet one or more of the following more
+          private members:
         </p>
         {nonfeaturedMembers.map((member: Member) => {
           const style = { "--member-color": member.color } as React.CSSProperties
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